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Technique summary: responsibility behind encouragement
Pair good wishes for graduates with a concrete commitment from the people and institutions around them.
Taft moves from wishing the graduating class success to describing federal support for Howard as an obligation, then closes with a promise of his own help. This structural lesson sits within an address containing racial paternalism and minimizing injustice. Borrow the connection between encouragement and support, not those assumptions.
Say it: Address the graduates directly, then slow down to state the support you can actually provide.